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Lyrics Of Mine: tell me what YOU think

الموضوع في 'English & French Archive' بواسطة UnLoCo, بتاريخ ‏6 سبتمبر 2008.

  1. UnLoCo

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      06-09-2008 21:51
    Hi there everybody,
    I'm new in this section but I'll jump over and show you what I got



    so


    These are lyrics I made all by myself and wanted to publish them so I can get your opinions as they matter to me


    Wounds into keep
    I can kill the pain I feel............I can force my wounds to heal
    I can make my heart of steel...........And forget this life for real


    I can have a better day.............Cuz' I can never live this way



    I'm no more able to keep myself stable
    I'm gunna live my life away
    But I'll never get angry
    and hurt myself every
    time I make any mistake
    time is a pill I'll never take



    I can make you feel the way..............I felt almost everyday
    I can surely make you pay
    ..... for all the games you used to play


    I can make you beg and pray..........for god to help you make me stay


    (but) I'll never stay no, in this inferno
    now it's my time to just move on
    of downs I had many but I can forget you
    any
    time your memory rises from the deep
    (but) u'r still a wound that's into keep




    waitin for your encouragement
    there will be more

     
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      06-09-2008 22:36
    *****:kiss:*****
     
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      06-09-2008 23:10
    great my friend unloco,I do encourage you to keep this way,I also like writing poetry and lyrics:satelite:
     
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      06-09-2008 23:10
    good one my friend ,congratulations
     
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      06-09-2008 23:20
    I have a poem that I wrote and I'm very interested to know your opinions.

    Once was there
    now is gone
    I will always
    love forever
    the laughts
    the tears
    the smiles
    without her
    my life has no sens
    no ups no downs
    no smile or frowns
    I miss her
    I cry
    I see her
    I lie
    what ever went wrong
    I can mend
    I will always
    love forever
    my very best friend

    :satelite:
     
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      07-09-2008 02:30
    you are just great guys :kiss:
     
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      07-09-2008 03:41
    That's very original man, very interesting, I like the dark side
    keep it live
    :satelite:
     
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      07-09-2008 04:05
    well, as promised, This is another one.
    It only reflects my "." of view but we may have some things in common, who knows !!!


    ready?

    I Hope you are !!


    Society



    Society, What are supposed to be ?
    Society, How are you supposed to seem?

    Are you only every stranger.........who looks just like the other?
    Are you every lonely ranger.......who's looking for a brother?


    Someone can you tell me why......we have to belong
    Someone can you help me hide......n' dissappear all along
    till I find out why....

    Society, let me know why does feel like
    "Social be, or you end up walking dead-like"?



    Is it that we're only living.....by the habbits that we're given?
    For how long will we be driven......till when will be so forgivin?

    Now I know the reason why......we have to be the same
    cuz' bein diffrent or any shy......would make us quit the game
    But it's all the same to me !



    and for more by GOD will
     
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      07-09-2008 05:32
    I just wanted to say that the first lyrics have already been composed (desert noise :well that's just the name for the melody) along with another one (just instrumental)

    wunna listen to them?

    [​IMG]


    Don't forget to lighten my path with what you think
     
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