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i love you so...

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  1. felosofie2008

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      25-10-2008 20:38
    !!!heyyyy boys heyyy girls i hpe that every body is okay

    my love dear love...
    dear love where are
    ican t......
    i can t stop iT thinking about u cuz u are always here in my heart
    tell me....yeah tell me why?u are so hard with me
    i love u soo...

    vevery day i looked to the sky
    And I’m thinking about u cuz u are so important for me
    Every day i looked the stars
    And i say
    ohhhhhhhhh dear ii miss u so where are you
    Every day in my dream u are here
    if u open my heart u will found ur self so why u don t care about me why
    I’m remember u
    You are so nice
    You have a big smile
    you are a good boy u have a big heart ohh dear!! why u don t care about me
    Why!
    you are my soul u are my heart
    u are in my mind every day when i wake up
    every day when i go to sleep i look to the sky and i found myself

    I’m thinking about you
    every day every
    Moment
    every
    Minute you are in my mind
    cuz u are so
    Important for me
    When
    i see that u are sad I’m sad too
    When i see that u are
    Happy I’m happy too
    cuz i love u soo
    but I don’t understand why u are like this
    why oh! my god im so sad i would to do
    something for that
    but.. what can i do
    just waiting
    waiting for the moment
    when you come back to me
    and cheer me up!!
    hope that every body will like my topic


     
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  2. Forrest Gump

    Forrest Gump كبير مراقبي منتدى الفرنسيّة و الانقليزيّة طاقم الإدارة

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      25-10-2008 21:35
    thanks a lot man but is this your lyrics?
     
  3. felosofie2008

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      25-10-2008 21:39
    fisrt of all im not a man thanks alot dear for ur reply and yeah that s my lyric u like it? thx dear
    :ahlan:
     
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      25-10-2008 21:44
    Pauvre Pauvre felesofie
    when I read the first sentence I thought I'll find something abnormal
    but after reading twice I found it original
    although you've made a lot mistakes
    but in general it's a good one
    try to wright in easy way
    First
    It's better to correct your presentation to value the reader
    you may say : Hi ladies and gentelmen I hope that you have good times
    you know what I mean;;

    second
    try to avoid this
    try to use the full pronoun you not u and because not cuz

    FINALLY I hope that I gave you somethinf fast to rewright ok

    good work


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  5. felosofie2008

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      25-10-2008 21:58
    thanks alot dear for your wonderfull reply i like it soo thanks you are welcome
    :ahlan:
     
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  6. Forrest Gump

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      25-10-2008 22:00
    im sorry felosofie2008 for that mistake :dance:
    anyway, nice lyrics and i wish we can meet you again in other english topics
    Good Luck
     
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  7. felosofie2008

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      25-10-2008 22:04
    don t worry no problem
    thanks alott dear
    your reply is soo nice
    welcome in my topic
    :ahlan:
     
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      25-10-2008 22:08
    Nice trial but what I noticed is that the language used is Arabish; I mean when you think in Arabic and you just translate ideas to English
    I felt that and I don't know if someone else felt it too
    Well, after all, Good work sister
    God bless you and we wait for more

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      25-10-2008 22:18
    I toatally agree with you Aida
    it exist in this trial some idea that are translated word by word from arabic to english


    I'll give you an advice
    please don't speak and wright amercain english
    try to learn british english it's much better




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  10. felosofie2008

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      25-10-2008 22:23
    Dear sister you are welcome in my topic thank you for that
    Dear be sure that I’m not thinking in Arabic language no and no that s a big mistake
    Any way I’m so happy for your reply thanks
     
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